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The black shoes sit
Fresh with leather perfume,
The perfect polish broken only by a crease
In the centre of each sole's cover.
There was a silent bustle
About the house,
In which many a black fabric
Was cast from each wardrobe.
Sun melted, and became rain;
Departure time circled overhead,
A plane that was reluctant to land.

There were so many preparations
That had not been made
And nestled restlessly, still,
In my crevasses of guilt.
There was that lingering
Essence of thought too,
She's not gone
She's still here.


Droplets hung like glass rain
Upon the rims of my eyes.
I fell against the wall,
My hood inverted,
And a werthers' original popped onto the floor.
©2006-2009 ~kalix
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Author's Comments

26/3/06

serendipity

I reckon only one person will understand what I'm on about, so this smile's for you :).

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:iconglorgindel:
the last line got me confused... :confused:

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:blackrose:

“Oh, yes, that’s SEXY.”
“I beg your pardon?”


:blackrose:
:iconnyctophiliac:
I understand most of it. And I can make a rough guess about the werthers' ...

I managed to get all the images on the first read, go me! :) And they're great, by the way, really well-conveyed.

Ja, the usual. Amazing, as ever (and don't you dare deny it).
:iconkalix:
the last line is the reference to which the 'only one person' will understand :D, so don't worry bout that

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08 FEB 2005
:iconkalix:
:w00t: for getting the images and :blush: thanks

the werthers' is the reference for the 'only one person', I'll explain when I see you if you want

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08 FEB 2005
:iconkalix:
I sense constructive critique :D

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08 FEB 2005
:iconglorgindel:
yer... i figured... :o
but somehow, i hoped I would be that 'only one person'... *le sigh*

uh well, it was pretty obvious i wouldn't be :p :) :hug:

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:blackrose:

“Oh, yes, that’s SEXY.”
“I beg your pardon?”


:blackrose:
:iconkalix:
aww :blush:

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08 FEB 2005

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