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-Orange in a Mug- by ~kalix:iconkalix:





"Why is there an orange in the mug?" the young man asked, fumbling in his folder for his essay.
       "The orange," she began, swallowing the word as if tasting it whole, "Represents satisfaction."
       "I don't get it," he laughed, "It's more than just an orange in a mug?" He looked at her briefly to register her response. It was a condensed smile that he shrivelled under, and he continued to hunt for the elusive essay with slightly reddening ears.
       "The mug is you," she declared, one finger resting lightly on the smooth curve of ceramic.
       "Right," he said, letting out another wry laugh, "I am a mug. I am a drinking vessel. I'm sorry...I still don't follow."
       "Look," she said, and pointed inside. For a moment he stopped rummaging and looked. But no matter how much he squinted, he saw nothing - except the orange.
       "What am I looking for?"
       "Not 'for', but 'at'," she said, and he could hear her smiling. "The orange does not fill the mug."
       It seemed to make some sort of sense, for a tiny flourish of thought before he again reverted back to the missing essay.
       "Basically," he said between the rustlings of his bag, "I can never be satisfied?"
       "So it would seem, because how can a sphere ever fill a cylinder?"
       The rustling stopped. His fingers had found the papers jammed between two of his books, but his attention was caught by something else. He picked up the mug and carried it to the sink where he carefully tipped out the orange and emptied the water. Then he brought the mug back to the lecturer and filled it with the orange juice on her desk.
       "There," he said with an odd sense of pride, "Satisfied."
       The lady smiled at him, uncalculatingly this time.
       "You can be content with life if you choose to be."
       He handed over the essay, his gaze linked to hers for a minute in which he found himself altered, and no longer quite himself. Suddenly he was struck by an inexplicable urge. He picked up the orange, peeled it, and ate it.
       "That," he said with a devilish grin, "Was satisfying."
©2006-2008 ~kalix
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Inspired by the wonderfully bizarre writings of :iconteasersp: and Andy's mum's equally bizarre herbal tea...

vague exploration of the human condition...


363 words.


Thanks very much to :iconlovetodeviate: and everyone who read/commented/:+fav:ed.
Daily Deviation, 2008-02-16

Daily DeviationIn this delicious piece of flash fiction, ~kalix writes about, well, an -Orange in a Mug-. The writer uses dialogue with skill to talk about life and how to live it. (Featured by ^lovetodeviate)

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~ProsePetals:iconProsePetals: Oct 25, 2006, 6:42:22 AM
This is a most unusual piece...a thinker...

....and I really really really like it. :nod:

:+fav:

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"...I can be cruel, but let me be gentle with you..."

~~Be careful...it's dumb out there.
~mirroredtruths:iconmirroredtruths: Oct 25, 2006, 6:51:38 AM Mood: Joy
I very much enjoy this!
:D
~runs of to read your other recent deviations~
I have been slacking :S
Anyway. Faved!

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Life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans--John Lennon

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~gaseous-ron:icongaseous-ron: Oct 25, 2006, 6:59:06 AM
Wow.

I have an urge....to.....

*stands up. Goes downstairs. gets an orange. EATS*

Oh yes. *drool*

Brilliant piece, as per usual darlin'
xxxxx ~Sushi

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~gaseous-ron:icongaseous-ron: Oct 25, 2006, 6:59:06 AM
Wow.

I have an urge....to.....

*stands up. Goes downstairs. gets an orange. EATS*

Oh yes. *drool*

Brilliant piece, as per usual darlin'
xxxxx ~Sushi

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~kalix:iconkalix: Oct 25, 2006, 6:59:54 AM
lol thanks :) was it a satisfying orange?

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08 FEB 2005
~kalix:iconkalix: Oct 25, 2006, 7:00:15 AM
aww thank you :) :hug:

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08 FEB 2005
~kalix:iconkalix: Oct 25, 2006, 7:00:33 AM
thank you :) :hug:

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08 FEB 2005
~ProsePetals:iconProsePetals: Oct 25, 2006, 7:03:35 AM
you are very welcome. :smooch:

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"...I can be cruel, but let me be gentle with you..."

~~Be careful...it's dumb out there.
~Teasersp:iconTeasersp: Oct 25, 2006, 12:25:00 PM
Hahahahahahahaha! :+fav:

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We'll cross that bridge when we come to it.
~kalix:iconkalix: Oct 25, 2006, 2:01:41 PM
was one of those "I saw this and thought of you..." moments :D

thank you :hug:

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08 FEB 2005